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so umm... i finally decided to continue the 100 themes challenge. this was supposed to be #33 - hunt - but it kinda turned into... gosh idek. a very long poem about a girl (me) trapped in her psyche. O.o
so yeahh. enjoy?
I have no idea where this came from.
sorry if there are any typos, it's 4:00 am and i typed this out on my smartphone soo...
umm. comment! and constructive criticism please? feedback is like coffee, it gives me energy and gives me a nice warm fuzzy feeling and keeps me going. (A little too far on the metaphor? Sorry.)
sorry if there are any typos, it's 4:00 am and i typed this out on my smartphone soo...
umm. comment! and constructive criticism please? feedback is like coffee, it gives me energy and gives me a nice warm fuzzy feeling and keeps me going. (A little too far on the metaphor? Sorry.)
In any case, PLEASE give me constructive criticism. What did you like about this piece? What could I have done better? Is it too long or too wordy? Etc etc etc...
so yeahh. enjoy?
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4 am, that's where. A few weakened barriers within your own mind and the poetry that steeps the depths of your soul sneak out onto the screen.
I still feel like my own best poetry come from moments like when I wrote during a car ride at night so I couldn't see what I wrote except the tiniest snatches from street lights to check I was still on the lines of the paper.
I still feel like my own best poetry come from moments like when I wrote during a car ride at night so I couldn't see what I wrote except the tiniest snatches from street lights to check I was still on the lines of the paper.